Conrad Rice

It's got promise, but you're going to need to develop it a bit more. - A boy from the Wild West is thrown into a universe parallel to his own, ...

Sounds like a shy, quiet girl who dreams of doing more with her life. Scranton Pheeney

7/10. Almost there, but it just doesn't feel quite right. When the killing time comes, a hard man never looks at his watch.

Deep (Thank you! :P )

Hill

Shrug my shoulders and go out on a hike for my birthday, when the day came. Lack of money doesn't mean you can't celebrate your birthday in your own way. ...

Sophie. This guy is kind of old and slow. He's been around quite a while, and he's awfully set in his ways. While he can be really coarse on first ...

Old

It felt like crap, probably because it was crap, and this realization made him think, "Oh, crap."

Hi. Name's Keith Huge. Don't mind me, I'm just passing through.

Well, you could always do an And Then There Were None style story, but put it in space. Barring that, maybe telling the story out of order. Mix up the ...

Skill, hands down. Soul but no skill is what your stereotypical "emo" poet has. There's a lot of emotion behind what they're writing, but there's not much skill, so it ...

The Scar, by China Meiville

Gotham Writers' Workship: Writing Fiction.

Sounds good. Just try to make your story unique. There is a series called Redwall that is rather similar, and if you don't try to make yours different people are ...